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evening prayer |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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evening prayer everywhere these ‘endless’ mountains beneath a restless November moon, above a sad and suffering world of dark valleys in a thousand falling shadows... (emptiness without respite?) hope lives! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, every now and then we move through dark valleys, but as you say "hope lives" because it knows it is rooted in the very Source of All there is. Beautiful evening prayer, like a breeze whispering softly to lift us out of darkness. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Love the ending.Yes, it does. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, To me the concept of "emptiness without respite" would be a nightmare. I like a crowd of other humans around me. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Prayer! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just as beneath a frozen stream, the water still flows and so as you pointed out quite well, hope does indeed live. Well done. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
'Hope lives" Yes it does. In a new born baby, in a newly planted tree, in the sun that shines each day, even if behind the clouds. And so much more! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hope Lives! It lives in all of us and it is part of every one of your poems. Hugs, A |
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