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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2008-11-16 10:50 PM



The fog won’t leave me alone
I lost site once you stepped away
Now I have nothing to hold on to
Cause I’m Lost in this path alone
The rain is scream’ in for me to run
But I don’t want to run blind
I don’t know what to think
My mind doesn’t know what wants

Nothing can make me happy
All I want to know
Is why I can’t find myself
I couldn’t talk to her now I’m lonely every night
All I want to know is her name
But that won’t make a difference if she doesn’t see anything in me
The music I want to sing is something I don’t have a voice for
I want to give up on it before I find out who I am
I’m tired of feeling this pain for so long
I want to cry every time I think of you
I feel the desire to find you but you’ll never see why
I wish I was able to find you alone
So i could tell you who i am
I want to see the night in your eyes


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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-11-16 11:01 PM


Haven't seen too many posts from you lately.  Vey powerfully emotional write.
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