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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Floating Memories Lift Me To The Universal Wholeness Of Life Remnants Of Deep Footprints Washed Away By Tides Of Forgetfulness Linger Within Me Self-Induced Aggression Challenges Me To Sit On A Beach Of Dreams Watching My Life Ebb And Flow With The Tide Braking Waves Of Energy Split By Yesterdays Wisdom Reunite In An Ocean Of Catechism Melting Into A Sea Of Mythology That Encapsulates My Consciousness In Vibrating Harmony I Expand My Sense Of Awareness And Smile www.shortsleeves.net http://halmanogue.blogspot.com/ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could not help smiling myself as I read your poem of beautifully expressed wisdom and self~ as well as Universal- understanding.  I visited your website and saw that you have 3 books published. Very impressive! Kudos to you, dear Poet!  EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
shortsleeves - your words bring awareness to life. Well done... BC |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you Earth Angel for your thoughts and interest in my work. Love, Hal |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, of course I enjoyed your poem. I can relate. For myself, however, I would probably close with tears and not a smile but I guess that's because I've still got a long way to go. Welcome to Pip! Helen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice expressions of expansion in this piece. Well thought out and much wisdom in self awareness. You also penned perfectly why I do exactly what you wrote about on a daily basis. |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you Bill, Helen and Mark for your thoughts. I appreciate your friendship and support. Chi-Fully, Hal |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I see we have never met on Pip!!! WELCOME TO PIP!!   ARCTIC WIND |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Yes, thank you. I appreciate your friendship. Chi-Fully, Hal |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You make me leap into untold heights of awareness, dear Hal, with your inspired words. To read you means to breathe deeper and seeing more clearly, beyond what appears to be the known limits. Love, Margherita  |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you dear Margherita. I appreciate your comments and inspiration. Love, Hal |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Welcome to Pip. This is a very beautiful poem. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sweet!!!! Juju -Juju |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you Oklahoma Rose and Juju. I appreciate your welcome and sweetness, as well as your friendship. Hal |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed your wisdom very much, Hal. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Melting Into A Sea Of Mythology That Encapsulates My Consciousness In Vibrating Harmony I Expand My Sense Of Awareness And Smile" I liked this stanza best...though all of it was excellent |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you for your thoughts, Marchmadness. Steavenr, I appreciate your thoughts and support. With Chi, Hal |
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