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Open Poetry #43

Autumn Wind

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-11-14 10:59 PM

               Autumn Wind

Threadbare November clouds
dance  a frosty, moonlit Autumn
   wind
with wisps of unraveling Time…
beyond the evening’s far-west horizon,
(into that fading twilight of all our
   finest hopes and dreams)
drawing malleable minds and
hearts along in poetic tempest,
through bittersweet, cascading reveries
on what may be ‘real,’ or the ‘true nature’
   of the  world …
save endless uncertainty, flux, change,
and a trend toward infinite emptiness.

          --- b. e. adams (11/14/08)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-11-15 09:36 AM

..."wisps of unraveling time"...
Stellar line

Enjoyed your thought provoking muse.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-11-15 10:35 AM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very good writing.

The concept of "infinite emptiness" is something that has bothered mankind through the ages.

Bobby

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2008-11-15 05:40 PM

nice image

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