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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-11-14 10:47 PM


You’ve got teeth so white
I can hardly stand it
maybe there's a secret
circular motion you brush them in.

You live on starlight drive
and your eyes don’t disappoint
me, but they put the stars
in a pretty sour mood.

That’s understandable,
It’s hard to be outshined
And take it lightly.
________________________________
He might have met a new girl. Don't get your hopes up.



Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-15-2008 08:28 AM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-11-15 02:03 PM


Paul,

This is a cute little poem.  I like it loads.

Bobby

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2008-11-15 06:56 PM


Fanks.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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