Open Poetry #43 |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You’ve got teeth so white I can hardly stand it maybe there's a secret circular motion you brush them in. You live on starlight drive and your eyes don’t disappoint me, but they put the stars in a pretty sour mood. That’s understandable, It’s hard to be outshined And take it lightly. ________________________________ He might have met a new girl. Don't get your hopes up. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-15-2008 08:28 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Paul, This is a cute little poem. I like it loads. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Fanks. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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