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fairy tale forest |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
Fleeing the forest in furor wigged wicked wolf on my trail a fine meal was made of that little girl riding shakes the red hood from his tail passing a cottage of cookies two bloated children look on fat from their gingerbread binging lost, now the breadcrumbs are gone to my left a prince is crying no kiss delivers life he's lynched by seven angry men who'd thought they'd found a wife make believe castles climb to the sky trees talk in tenuous tones jack not so nimble burning with fire while bears pick through golden haired bones lost among hundreds of acres creatures from fairytale dreams those I embraced as a child have become a bit darker it seems reaching the edge of the treeline back to the world, such a bore far more foreboding than fictional forests I return to the woodland once more |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is so true - and so well written. I am saving it. Great job! A |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
thanks for the kind words alison |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep, this is cool for sure, I really enjoyed the twist of it  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes the is different, I like it, more to it than meets the eye. Ida |
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