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I do not want....
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I do not want.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I do not want for love Yet I yearn for closeness I do not want for happiness Yet I yearn for laughter I do not want for riches Yet I yearn for simplicity I do not want for solitude Yet I yearn for stillness I simply yearn for something To take away the ache Of your absence in my heart Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (10-30-2008 07:16 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ah..I was just trying to explain this feeling a few days ago... I said, it isn't like I want long term, but I want something. What I didn't understand is something has a name and nothing else seems good enough... an ache it is. Well done. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I like the simplicity in this one. A yearning for something so necessary, "To take away the ache" Good write! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
really Roniece it is one of your best, i love the nuances between the emotions and you find the right words to express subtlety of light differences...This is a jewel that I, will add to my favourite... have a nice day yann |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Some of the most simple things in life carry the most impact and leave the treasured moments causing us deep yearnings when they are absent. You voice it well and the format was just as enjoyable as the content. Well done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce - to have just some of these will give one some of those. With a smile, I came by to read your writing... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, I'm afraid I don’t quite understand this. Is this a simple case of impatience? Love Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a beautiful, heart-warming write...nicely done...makes you just wanna say...isn't that nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...from my personal experiences I think its acceptance...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I have an extra whoopee cushion you can borrow...shall I send it? enjoyed the pen ms |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile-- it's like looking in a spiritual refrigerator, that's fully stocked, and then saying "there's nothin' to eat". ohhhhhhhh...I understand this.  You are looking most lovely, too, I might add.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I simply yearn for something To take away the ache" Oh yes, indeed! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A True poet RDB! ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I know of this ache, dear Roniece, and you expressed it ever so beautifully. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone... your comments are so lovley on my work always... love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Roniece, I really like this. I sure know how it is to have such an ache. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I loved these words Roniece you so ecoed thoughts I have so often my friend. Thank you for sharing your truth of thought and the you within. Have a great day tomorrow and take care. Rick |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this one aches Roniece my friend it simply aches |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Roneice, I reallly felt the longing and the ache in your beautiful loving heart. I cannot help but think that the object ~ rather, 'subject' ~ of your affection is a Frenchman!  I believe I have a very good understanding of where you're coming from with this well-stated and emotive write ~ and you said it perfectly!  Love 'n hugs, Lindylou |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
You write really beautiful.. Its sad to hear your search for inner peace.. this is a truly beautiful poem.. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY powerful & well written! serious applause!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I do love your writing Roniece! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Roniece, I'm sure each and everyone of us would love to be able to take away the ache in your heart. You are a beautiful person and I'm so pleased to call you my friend, may God bless you my friend. Love. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB, I never want you to ache inside. This is a wonderful poem. Love, Ali-girl |
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