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A Fabled Elegy
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A Fabled Elegy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Oh, how these dark clouds shroud those days when my soul soared free, as I became lost within the words of your verse. Each page, a dream written, each paragraph unfolding into a chapter sealed with a kiss laced in edges of happily ever afters yet my heart knows that there are more sunny days waiting to be written but today, today my soul is empty as I wait for your voice to once again leave footprints across the pages of my life, marking them with the brilliance of your song guiding my heart back to where it belongs within the rainbow splashed colors of your word, your rhythm and rhyme to a place where the sun forever shines and fairytales are no longer needed to shield me safe from all harm and I am once again held within the sanctuary of your arms. © dmsmith |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful write...great phrases and lovely word choices I especially liked this: "today my soul is empty as I wait for your voice to once again leave footprints across the pages of my life" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice longing of heart. The following line of yours .... -------------------------------- within the rainbow splashed colors of your word, your rhythm -------------------------------- That image is what life, love, and happiness feels like when all is right with the world. Enjoyed much. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"leave footprints across the pages of my life," Lovely. Everything about this piece is special, from the phrases to the style of font and the lay-out. Lovely. Enjoyed Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I know those arms of embrace. You will wear them well again soon Meantime you will wear your own with great fortitude and elegance in words |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Life's short And soon to end. Tell him John . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How precious, intreging.....so much a joy to read.. always impressively done. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Darling friend, John is right. Life IS short - and may you always be loved. You are a wonderful lady and you deserve more than the fairy tales. Love, Alison |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
This is how I feel today..and I'm praying...this was a beautiful outpour... The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such delicate beauty in your words... may those sunny days come soon. *S* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery and Romanticism! serious applause for this 'penning'! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My dear Pip family, thank you each for stopping by and blessing me with the graciousness of your replies. Hugs n peace ~D |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Each page, a dream written, each paragraph unfolding into a chapter sealed with a kiss laced in edges of happily ever afters" Gentle Donna I so wish you happily ever afters a delicate piece of work |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I know I don’t have the right words to describe feelings this one has evoked. Excellent! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
That's so beautiful and well written.. I loved this line,sigh.. leave footprints across the pages of my life, Thank you |
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