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Sharon Rose
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since 2008-11-03
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0 posted 2008-11-12 10:46 PM


        


  The snow is covering the pathway home, and night is growing near.
  The air is chilling cold and the sky is crystal clear.
  I watch to see familar sights as I hurry on my way.
  I see a ice covered stream where once I laughed and played.
  I've hurried down this path , a hundred times it seems.
  This once I pray, I make it home before I awaken from this dream.

                            

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Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
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1 posted 2008-11-12 11:42 PM


You write very beautifully, Home is where the heart is.. I hope you reach it quickly,smiles..
americangothic
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since 2008-11-11
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2 posted 2008-11-13 12:00 PM


paints a great picture.....I often dream of places in my past and wish I could revisit them
Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-11-13 03:07 AM


I hope you make it too, Sharon. Good writing.
               Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-11-13 04:02 AM


Sharon.. I do like your poem very much   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2008-11-13 11:50 PM


Sharon - don't know how I missed this one. Well done, and hope to see many more writings...

BC

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