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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-11-11 06:23 AM

knuckles up in some marlboro morning
riding metal through a cabin fever sky
I don't remember the old days now

the new ones are on computers faster
than just thinking can do
and replaying memories takes time

more than my fat round 60 ring bus stop
but this bench is a new woman shape
with fiberglass curves and quiet makeup

except for the four letter words
left by the thug bugs with spray paint
and the IQ's of shoe laces when wet

and streetlights change shirts too often

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daark (for OWG)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2008-11-11 06:31 AM

OWG is missed m'friend. And your words
made me smile. Morning babe.

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-11 08:16 AM

I loved this- the IQ's of shoe laces when wet. I have friends like that,smiles.. Thanks for sharing..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-11-11 08:28 AM

Ms GS thanks babe. Feels to do the wind again.

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Ms Pantha. Thanks so much

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2008-11-11 08:52 AM

"knuckles up in some marlboro morning
riding metal through a cabin fever sky
I don't remember the old days now

the new ones are on computers faster
than just thinking can do
and replaying memories takes time"

makes me think of early coastal mornings...

I sure miss that.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-11-11 09:06 AM

You dialed it babe. Wish you were to wear em. Thanks

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2008-11-11 05:15 PM

Love that last picture-love it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-11-11 06:36 PM

quote:
but this bench is a new woman shape
with fiberglass curves and quiet makeup

except for the four letter words
left by the thug bugs with spray paint

Things that happen in too many places. But the originality of your poetic interpretation of this corner of corners is quite exceptional, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-11-11 09:47 PM

ms nan, thanks so much

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ms mar, thank you for the eyes lady

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