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As I Went Down In the River
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As I Went Down In the River |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I went down In the river To pray And a man With a beard Asking me said What is it you think You’re doing And I realized I had no idea . |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
River water clear, washing clean rocks, washing rocks bubbles rise and fall wavelets break on piled-up rock and Sister whispers, Jesus Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
tremendously thoughtful...Let us drift apart (do we say that?) it is a deep breath. yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I went down In the river To pray" I've been reading this to pieces. It's such a small word, but why In the river? (If you don't mind indulging me with the question, that is.) It's a teeny little word, but using "in" the river instead of "to" implies a baptism. Is that the intent?  ? <--*smile* |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
It's from the Title of a song John |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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