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Open Poetry #43

darkness / has risen

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2008-11-10 11:38 PM

darkness
has risen

I walk
the freshly frozen bay
toward the risen half moon
that disappears
as I approach
like your car lights
disappearing
over the hill
in this country song

sometimes
I want
the ice
to hold me;
sometimes
I want it
to break;
and though I whisper
your name,
you are not the cause

it has always
been like this,
and I have always
let the ice
decide

poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-11-11 03:21 AM

Anthony,

I can't really put into words how I like your poem or how it makes me feel. I just feel it and like it and will be heading to your site tomorrow to check it out.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-11 05:36 AM

yes... I'm with Ali-girl.. I feel it and I like it... your poetry is wonderful Anthony.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-11-11 06:13 AM

Intriguing, melancholic and captivating.

Be cautious, the ice may react to your own inner vibrations ..., so ultimately it's always you who decide.

Love,
Margherita

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2008-11-11 08:22 AM

You write, I read.. I liked what I read and I really like how you write.. Thanks for sharing..

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