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Sunset Boulevard
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Sunset Boulevard |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunset Boulevard It hasn't been that long. My darling never would stay away too long. No way my darling could stay away that long. Still its been awhile a journey into precious parts of my past. It seems like ten thousand midnights ago since I've seen my darling last. JamesLee 08November 2008 |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
You used the words to paint a scence. I liked this very much. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Jamesmichael!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, Nice work. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
enjoyed this James love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one reads like a song. I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - it's difficult when they are away for even a short time... BC |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James, I hope that you see your darling again soon. You deserve to hold her in your arms again. Alison |
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