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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-11-10 08:28 PM


Sunset Boulevard

It hasn't been that long.
My darling never would
stay away too long.
No way my darling could
stay away that long.
Still its been awhile
a journey into precious
parts of my past.
It seems like ten thousand
midnights ago since I've
seen my darling last.

JamesLee
08November
2008
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Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
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Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2008-11-10 08:40 PM

You used the words to paint a scence.
I liked this very much.
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-11-10 09:42 PM

Enjoyed the Write Jamesmichael!


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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3 posted 2008-11-10 10:10 PM

James,

Nice work.

Bobby
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-11-11 06:24 AM

enjoyed this James love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2008-11-11 02:44 PM

This one reads like a song.  I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2008-11-11 11:26 PM

JamesMichael - it's difficult when they are away for even a short time...

BC
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7 posted 2008-11-12 10:33 PM

James,

I hope that you see your darling again soon.  You deserve to hold her in your arms again.

Alison
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