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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2008-11-09 01:31 PM

Yesterday In Today
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Sunlight peeks through misty clouds,
and as I gaze at their restlessness
my thoughts are transcended
into the peacefulness of your mind…

I warmth the fire of wanting,
to remember of time
when you were held close,
desiring for yesterday in today…

Allured by the warmness
of a life yet to be in serenity,
able to dull the sharpness within…
~~~~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-11-09 02:04 PM

Yes, warm memories of yesterdays can "dull the sharpness within" our todays.

May your todays become warm memories of
yesterdays!

Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-11-09 02:23 PM

Very nice, love those last lines, Bill.
Ida

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

3 posted 2008-11-09 09:15 PM

Those pleasant times do bring warm memories, don't they?

[This message has been edited by Oklahoma Rose (11-10-2008 01:42 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-11-09 09:35 PM

my thoughts are transcended
into the peacefulness of your mind…

ah just so beautiful Bill Charles! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-11-10 10:50 AM

I love the verses and all the poem, this is quite melancholic when you say :
desiring for yesterday in today…
memories are precious...but reviving them must be wonderful....

thanks

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-11-10 11:42 AM

Dear Bill, I wish you a today that makes you forget about yesterday!

This is tenderly melancholic and I enjoyed it.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-11-10 01:51 PM

Allured by the warmness
of a life yet to be in serenity,
able to dull the sharpness within…
~~~~
That soulful ache that haunts
So well written here

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2008-11-10 05:48 PM

Beautifully penned, enjoyed the warmth within.

Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2008-11-10 06:23 PM

"Allured by the warmness
of a life yet to be in serenity,
able to dull the sharpness within…"

Exactly!

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-11-11 11:46 PM

lovely...james

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

11 posted 2008-11-12 07:45 AM

Beautiful and touching , Those memories can bring comfort at times when needed

Hope

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

12 posted 2008-11-12 02:17 PM

Lovely write, Bill. Sad but lovely!

Helen

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2008-11-12 02:42 PM

Thanks all for coming by for a read, and you're comments. It's deeply appreciated...

BC

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

14 posted 2008-11-12 10:35 PM

Nice one Bill, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2008-11-13 03:24 PM

Wonderfully Written Bill! ~ I really enjoyed this write!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

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