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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-11-05 12:10 PM

This Place

In this place
In a memory of love
In this place
Looking away
To the autumn night
Time ain't right for me
To figure out
Which place is right or wrong
for me
Looking ahead
To the future
Looking at the time
Here
Standing in this place
Where I can see your face
On my mind
In a memory of love
Feeling so lost
Feeling pain
Inside my heart
In this place
I shouldn't stay here
In this place
I should go away
To the other place
My heart aches
For your love
I want to run away
To the sun
Of where my dreams can
follow my heart
In this place.....
From this place....

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-11-05 09:12 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This is a good write.

For some reason it brings to mind an old saying of mine.

Home is not where the heart is, it's where the hat is.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-11-07 05:33 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-11-07 05:44 PM

Places hold memories and can make us ache in the way you so lovingly express here, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2008-11-07 06:13 PM

Memories can truly tear us up inside.....Very good!

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-11-07 07:53 PM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-11-09 02:46 AM

Vandana,

Wherever you may wander, don't ever leave this place. It would be emptier without your poetry.

Alison

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-11-09 02:50 AM

vandana, I am always touched by the pink
love ink that flows from your pen.

May all your dreams come true!

Love and hugs,
Linda

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2008-11-09 03:43 AM

Hi Vandana, very thoughtful and beautiful sharing....The question is : would changing place could change the soul...I think as a traveller it is absolutly true...The journeys enlight the soul and give tremendous recul (french word meaning you see things differently)..I f you can go se the world, there are so much beauty, unexpected places, unexpected people...

best wishes

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-11-09 06:16 AM

lovely Vandana... I enjoyed your poem so very much.. and our Ali-girl is right.. you can't leave us.. we love your poetry too much!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-11-09 11:04 AM

ARCTIC WIND

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

11 posted 2008-11-09 01:21 PM

Lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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