Open Poetry #43 |
Light Harbor |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. So here we are— You and I again Going down The same road Somehow I knew You'd wait For me Detoured As I was By an old cause Another November sea Rolls upon the shore The year’s Last leaves Falling From the trees It’s good To be back Where I belong And far away From then . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
comforting |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
makes you want to break out in a big smile and soft wish congratulations...nicely written |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi - nice write... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most effective ... VERY well done! fine 'write' ... serious applause!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful!!! it was lovely to read this John.. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I just wanted to 'revisit' this one! continuing applause!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Reassuring. It is good to see an almost-smile on your face. - Owl |
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