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She Was
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
She was a precious baby, an adorable child, a beautiful woman, a caring mother and a treasured memory until all who remembered were gone. Ida Werrett |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
sad... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is a sad reality to this...makes one ponder |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, This is a scathing indictment of the domestic lifestyle. I like it loads. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
No, it isn't. It is about a memory and no one left to remember it. Ida |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
we live on and are loved in others memories..beautiful though tragic piece. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thoughtful Ida yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Ida, I was just thinking about this the other day so thank you for putting my thoughts into words. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is touching Ida! ~saddens the very minds of who ever reads this!!!  to youARCTIC WIND/font> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Ida, I was saddened as I read all that "she" WAS... Then when I read the closing lines ~ "and a treasured memory until all who remembered were gone." ~ I literally got a lump in my through. Sending a warm, loving compassionate hug, Linda  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
she is and always will be beautiful  The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Ida, that is such a cute post, short, sad and to the point. You wrote it well. Love to you my friend. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marchmadness - very powerful and meaningful words. Memories, no one to remember, almost like on crying from sadness, and no one to see it to help... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ida, How sad to be lost from memory. And how kind to remember. Lovely write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is really powerful, dear Ida. But then now, through you, you see, she is remembered. And I strongly believe she enjoys loving company up there, even if down here the echoes fade. Thought provoking and compassionate! Love, Margherita |
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