Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Wishes He Were Dead |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
It’s cold and pouring rain. Bones is in the street, and he’s soaked. He has nowhere to go. He wishes he were dead. He knows he’d go to heaven, because he’s never hurt anyone. It would be nice and warm up there. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I'd give bones a poncho, if I owned one. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Viking_metal (Paul), For your very generous thought on Bones behalf. I’m sure you would gladly give a poncho to him. I think many people would, most especially people that have found themselves in similar trouble. As you know, it can be awful out there. I hope you get a ponco soon. Bobby |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
If I was in charge, I would send Bones on to heaven . He wouldn’t need a poncho there, just them golden slippers . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh no, I sure don't wish Bones was dead! I would look after him Bobby that's for sure... love and hugs to Bones ... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Chopsticks, Bones loves those golden slippers. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, Bones knows you would look after him. He says your a nice lady. He sends you loads of hugs back. Love Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you liked the poem. Bobby |
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