Open Poetry #43 |
It was only a dream... |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You told me, we were like twins One soul, two bodies Your kiss sealed my broken dreams You placed my hand over your heart I shed a tear, you wiped it away Your lips curled back in a smile, while you brushed my hair away from my brow "Why are you crying?" you asked I turned away, you pulled back my hair behind my ear and whispered softly, "Come here and let me see those baby blues." I turned back, hot breath on your neck I traced your face with my finger tips, while I pressed my lips against yours in a passionate kiss I pulled back, only for you to pull me in closer My lips lingered towards your ear, slightly touching Hot breath whispering, "Because, it's only a dream." The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Stacey011 Junior Member
since 2008-10-27
Posts 18Australia |
That's beautiful. I felt like I was actually there. Very good visualisation! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Only a dream? Still ... sweetly romantic. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sweet sweet Dreams~ How can we live without them? ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kristen... I like your dreams! lovely writing here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey Kris, Dreams are simply a prelude to reality. Look in your tea leaves and see the beauty of your future. Hang in there, girly. xooxxo Ali |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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