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| Open Poetry #43 |
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cove of white stone |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were the vanilla laughter that drizzled down an ocean's chin when she was a playful voyeur with wanting to be us in her eyes the sand on your footprints smiled as you walked barefoot to your neckline always turning around to see my smile and why I walked behind you on purpose you leaned under the imaginary palm tree against the concrete that heard highways and said your lips were broken bad and maybe a kiss would heal them better we found other broken places after and spent the hours making adjustments you said the ocean was talking about us and was making sounds like we did inside our minds while holding hands _______________ daark (white stone series) |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This had such a fine scented texture that I caught myself licking my lips to check and see if they were chapped. This piece took my breath away. BRAVO! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Janette...thanks so much |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
romantic write with a strong opening, tightly woven to an exquisite ending...enjoyed, a pleasure to read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Stevenr...thanks my friend |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
the subtlety of your words captivates my imagination (again)! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply divine Mr Daark...  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
tsu, thank you for reading and commmenting __________________ ms r&b, thanks lady |
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