Open Poetry #43 |
You Owe Me Three Hours of Sleep. |
viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
It's far too late at night to be thinking of you but i try try to close my eyes tight enough to block the rays of your ideal smile. I'll roll over and tight tighten the opposite side of my thickened ribs I can't get comfortable lying on your adamantine memory. __________________ The Sadie Series. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-01-2008 05:12 PM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This happens to me too sometimes. We humans are certainly odd creatures. I hope you share more of this series...k |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
The luster of a memory at times sparkles yet does have the hardness of stone. Great read. Enjoyed Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you, my fine friends. And yeah.. memories can be the clouds beneath your dreams, or a bed of jagged rock.. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I roll my eyes and say oh no not again! seriously, been there done that.. The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
clever title for an excellent write...let me know if you ever get paid |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
"i cant get comfortable lying on your adamantine memory" such a unique line,i love it and how it got under my skin..very memorable piece |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love the title--one of those "wish I'd thoughta that" moments for me! enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
viking_metal - touching write of memories that still linger... BC |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thank you all so very much! I wrote this very late at night on a whim... Stupid girls.... Ha! I liked the title, myself. Thought it was fitting. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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