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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-10-31 03:03 AM

It's far too late at night
to be thinking of you
but i try try to close my eyes
tight enough to block the rays of your ideal smile.

I'll roll over and tight tighten the opposite side
of my thickened ribs
I can't get comfortable
lying on your adamantine memory.

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The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-01-2008 05:12 PM).]

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-10-31 08:35 AM

This happens to me too sometimes. We humans are certainly odd creatures. I hope you share more of this series...k

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2008-10-31 09:04 AM

The luster of a memory at times sparkles yet does have the hardness of stone.

Great read.

Enjoyed

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2008-10-31 11:36 AM

Thank you, my fine friends.

And yeah.. memories can be the clouds beneath your dreams, or a bed of jagged rock..

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2008-10-31 01:01 PM

I roll my eyes and say oh no not again! seriously, been there done that..

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-10-31 05:54 PM

clever title for an excellent write...let me know if you ever get paid

tsu
Junior Member

since 2008-10-20

Posts 29
u.k.

6 posted 2008-10-31 06:32 PM

"i cant get comfortable
lying on your adamantine memory"
such a unique line,i love it and how it got under my skin..very memorable piece

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2008-10-31 07:25 PM

Love the title--one of those "wish I'd thoughta that" moments for me!

enjoyed

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2008-10-31 08:35 PM

viking_metal - touching write of memories that still linger...

BC

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2008-11-01 12:07 PM

Thank you all so very much! I wrote this very late at night on a whim... Stupid girls.... Ha!

I liked the title, myself. Thought it was fitting.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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