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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-10-30 07:42 PM


Wandering steadily in the readily awakening ceremony
where lyrical dexterity combines within me by the holy matrimony
aimlessly awaiting my fate to be in the balance of suspension
violence with prevention, within the solstice of dimension
countless fabrications of my linguistic formulations
of algorithms programed to inject venomous rhythm operations
rippin' fabrics with a generated matrix reality
converts actuality into a schizophrenic paranormal mentality
actually seeing the bleeding anatomy of humanity
when it's come time to see freedom is replaced with insanity
damnation provokes the tokens of symbolistic emotions
egotistic commotion generates energy for egotistic locomotion
directed to the inspected bodies of political deception
those who have analytical minds can find diacritical perception
so they may distinguish who's fictitious and who's completely real
as I close this dialect with my reality seal.

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1 posted 2008-10-30 07:50 PM


and what color is the wax?



Don't take that the wrong way..I don't think I meant it any singular way.

This just provoked so much thought in me, and it reminded me of a childhood sing-song thing we'd do that ended with:

"What color was the blood?"

This does have that same lyrical quality.

Thanks for the re-memory thought-provoke!

Enjoyed.

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-10-30 07:52 PM


You're welcome! lol
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