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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-10-27 11:01 PM



the sleeves of your eyes some mornings
how they wipe the sun from a yawn
and then look through me nude windowed

I never would mind that again
even driving along our rincon highway
I wonder if the rocks are still stacked

by other lovers that couldn't do things
that they wanted to because of the public
so they made symbols for the gods of lust

like we did, but ours were better
and I often see your face on a stranger
when they have the pillow that way

and call me by their other lover's name also


_____________


daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-10-28 02:34 AM


and I often see your face on a stranger
when they have the pillow that way


lovely Mr Daark... you have smiled my day..

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-10-28 07:06 AM


Ms r/b thanks.
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2008-10-28 08:27 AM


o
what happens between the dark
and the light
i won't tell if you don't tell
just let the others
do our screaming

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-10-28 09:26 AM


Ms inki, viva! let em watch and wonder. Thanks babe
Indigo
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5 posted 2008-10-28 04:48 PM


faceless and wanting
she's but a new replacement
undoing blue jeans.

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-10-28 04:58 PM


ms indi...I do like your line of pillowcases..was such a sexy idea to put your photos on them...grin  thanks babe
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-10-28 05:16 PM


Lovely!


ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
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8 posted 2008-10-28 06:04 PM


"the sleeves of your eyes some mornings
how they wipe the sun from a yawn"

great phrase for a remarkable image...enjoyed

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-10-28 08:25 PM


AW. Thanks amigo


________

Steveanr, thanks my friend

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10 posted 2008-10-28 11:09 PM


love how that word falls from your lips...

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2008-10-28 11:15 PM


Dark Stranger - written with feeling, many thoughts, excellent write...

BC

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-10-29 06:19 AM


Lady Lauren, you bless me

____________

thanks Bill

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13 posted 2008-11-01 07:00 PM


D,

This goes beyond beautiful to me.  It touches me in places that I let few touch.  You have a way with words that turns them into music - and you create a song that sings to my imagination.

A

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-11-02 06:33 AM


ms ali-san...thank you
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