Open Poetry #43 |
stone people and nude windows |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the sleeves of your eyes some mornings how they wipe the sun from a yawn and then look through me nude windowed I never would mind that again even driving along our rincon highway I wonder if the rocks are still stacked by other lovers that couldn't do things that they wanted to because of the public so they made symbols for the gods of lust like we did, but ours were better and I often see your face on a stranger when they have the pillow that way and call me by their other lover's name also _____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and I often see your face on a stranger when they have the pillow that way lovely Mr Daark... you have smiled my day.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thanks. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o what happens between the dark and the light i won't tell if you don't tell just let the others do our screaming |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms inki, viva! let em watch and wonder. Thanks babe |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
faceless and wanting she's but a new replacement undoing blue jeans. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...I do like your line of pillowcases..was such a sexy idea to put your photos on them...grin thanks babe |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely! ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the sleeves of your eyes some mornings how they wipe the sun from a yawn" great phrase for a remarkable image...enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW. Thanks amigo ________ Steveanr, thanks my friend |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love how that word falls from your lips... ~~**~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - written with feeling, many thoughts, excellent write... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Lauren, you bless me ____________ thanks Bill |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, This goes beyond beautiful to me. It touches me in places that I let few touch. You have a way with words that turns them into music - and you create a song that sings to my imagination. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...thank you |
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