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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
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0 posted 2008-11-02 01:14 AM


"Lost"

Right now I'm in a good space
But it wasn't always this way
I kept  doing the opposite of winning
Even though I tried my best to do the opposite sinning
I was still catching L's
Like a bad pitcher's counterpart
At one point I lost all the will in my  mind
And all the hope in my heart
But I'm not a quitter
So when life knocked me down
I got back up
And said "even though I'm losing…I'm not lost"


The determination and perseverance will eventually payoff

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-11-02 06:14 AM


yes, determination and perserverence does shine thru... lovely gifting here Street Poet... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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