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The Suffering Soul.
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The Suffering Soul. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
I'm broken with blood soaked clothes ill spoken words drenched in blood from my nose everything that I chose, everything that's been said little things in my head speak of spells from the dead glossed with dread instead of the usual suffering stalling to punish me like a video buffering wondering whether or not my blood is still circulating as these tears circle around my eyes, ready and waiting these sudden impulses have driven me insane trying to retain my brain with the capacity of a grain broken down humanity cries silent heartfelt sobs wallowing in the darkness, as the pain pricks and throbs the scent of tears in the repenting years displays the helpless calls of a resenting fear the optical stimulant of a man losing his will as his spirit dies in front of you, you have witnessed a kill. Black roses withering silently, encased in lettering those who witnessed this event knows there is no bettering as the pen prints the picture, the picture has no light chaos surrounding each stroke, visions come to sight seeing the faces of mankind weep with deepened passion tears dropping faster, pressure underlines the compassion feeling empty, remorseful as my hands erosion begins the feeling of hopelessness penetrates the skin the resonating sound of my own voice booming pleading for someone to help, in a realm where nothing is soothing liquid slides ever so slowly down my tired face droplets turns to streams which turns to a water race hunched over with my knees touching the ground the intensity of a suffering soul's pain is the only sound. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Angel, There are some excellent phrases in this write. Bobby |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thank you Bobby! :] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wow!! Angel... this is an amazing write from you ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thanks RBD! I appreciate the kind words =) |
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