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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-11-01 09:15 PM


I'm broken with blood soaked clothes
ill spoken words drenched in blood from my nose
everything that I chose, everything that's been said
little things in my head speak of spells from the dead
glossed with dread instead of the usual suffering
stalling to punish me like a video buffering
wondering whether or not my blood is still circulating
as these tears circle around my eyes, ready and waiting
these sudden impulses have driven me insane
trying to retain my brain with the capacity of a grain
broken down humanity cries silent heartfelt sobs
wallowing in the darkness, as the pain pricks and throbs
the scent of tears in the repenting years
displays the helpless calls of a resenting fear
the optical stimulant of a man losing his will
as his spirit dies in front of you, you have witnessed a kill.

Black roses withering silently, encased in lettering
those who witnessed this event knows there is no bettering
as the pen prints the picture, the picture has no light
chaos surrounding each stroke, visions come to sight
seeing the faces of mankind weep with deepened passion
tears dropping faster, pressure underlines the compassion
feeling empty, remorseful as my hands erosion begins
the feeling of hopelessness penetrates the skin
the resonating sound of my own voice booming
pleading for someone to help, in a realm where nothing is soothing
liquid slides ever so slowly down my tired face
droplets turns to streams which turns to a water race
hunched over with my knees touching the ground
the intensity of a suffering soul's pain is the only sound.


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-11-01 09:34 PM


Angel,

There are some excellent phrases in this write.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-11-01 09:38 PM


Thank you Bobby! :]
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-11-02 06:18 AM


Wow!! Angel... this is an amazing write from you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

xTr3m3sT
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4 posted 2008-11-02 08:27 AM


Thanks RBD! I appreciate the kind words =)
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