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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah Pop How I miss you— Acorns falling Through autumn leaves . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this short write spoke volumes to me...how the smallest things can conjure the strongest memories...how that while we're busy remembering, life just keeps moving on...needless to say, enjoyed... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I enjoy the link you create between acorns and your father, the fall of acorns symbolize the ineluctable ending and shortness of life....This is really good. yann |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'd already scheduled a cemetery visit for the weekend... your words punch right in the gut/heart/center of missing. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful poem, John. Whilst, I am sad for you, simultaneously, I envy you. I wish I missed my parents. I understand the title very well. - Owl |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, From tiny acorns mighty oak doth grow. Bobby |
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