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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2008-11-02 07:03 PM



My flock of sheep graze in the middle
and all the children, in need of care,
will dance around with happy faces,
because there's only love to share.

In corner one I'll put the poets,
whom I've come to love, for evermore.
Soulmates from around the world,
who's poetic beauty, I sure adore.

In corner two lives mother Nature,
because without, I cannot exist.
She shows us seasons full adornment,
with smelling roses, in soft dawn's mist.

In corner three resides my family,
with all their friends, a happy bunch.
They tease and please and help each other,
while preparing an enormous lunch.

In corner four there's only silence,
where one can think of loved ones lost.
Where spirits fill hearts of the living,
with little prints of love embossed.

The walls display each one a season,
their beauty is covering the top.
I've nothing left that I could wish for,
my box is full, so here I'll stop.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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Alison
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1 posted 2008-11-02 08:13 PM


quote:
The walls display each one a season,
their beauty is covering the top.
I've nothing left that I could wish for,
my box is full, so here I'll stop.



May you never stop sharing your magic.  This is a keeper and shows your heart as if your magical box is made of glass.

Alison

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2 posted 2008-11-02 09:14 PM


"In corner four there's only silence,
where one can think of loved ones lost.
Where spirits fill hearts of the living,
with little prints of love embossed."

wasn't expecting this, but is a very nice complement to the the make-up of your box...well thought out and a pleasurable read

Janette
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3 posted 2008-11-03 11:25 AM


"with little prints of love embossed."

I adored this "corner four," and the pictures in my mind that it created.

Enjoyed

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2008-11-04 08:29 PM


Hi Titia, my friend. You know, you are one special lady, yourself. You are always in my heart. And, that is where you will always be.
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5 posted 2008-11-06 02:24 PM


I like your box very much... like you, it's unique and utterly lovely!
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