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Open Poetry #43

stars in the night.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-10-27 01:18 PM

Stars in the night
diamonds
around the neck
of the Milky Way.

Stars in the night
diamonds
for luring
men.

Stars in the night
diamonds
for dresses
of black vastness.

Stars in the night
diamonds
dropped
from my pocket.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (10-27-2008 05:29 PM).]

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

1 posted 2008-10-27 03:10 PM

Nice...

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-27 03:16 PM

"diamonds
around the neck
of the Milky Way"

lovely turn of a phrase...nice write...loved the ending

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-10-27 03:46 PM

yann,

This is lovely - very lovely.

Alison

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2008-10-27 05:20 PM

2islander2 - stars in the night, all these things. Nice read...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-10-27 05:57 PM

Yann, you do come up with some lovely, memorable lines in your poems!

"diamonds
around the neck
of the Milky Way."

~ Next time I look up at the Milky Way, I'll be thinking of your poem!

Love & Star Light,
Linda

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2008-10-27 11:24 PM

I love the stars and this was beautiful. Thanks for sharing :-)

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

7 posted 2008-10-28 01:10 PM

.

Yann,

So she's using your stars to sparkle . . .
Been there more than once . . .

Good Read

John

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

8 posted 2008-10-28 01:56 PM

"diamonds
around the neck
of the Milky Way."

Oh! I like this.

Enjoyed!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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