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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-10-27 12:52 PM


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Well the guys and I
Are stowing our gear

Again
It’s time to go
Our being ready to sail
And we’d had more
Than enough on shore

A life at sea
Has a certain
Equanimity

A pale blue sky
Above the
Bannered rigs

While left
At the dock
There’s another
Life crying out

Hey what about
These pigs


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2008-10-27 02:14 PM


you know, they ran Him out of town for serving up deviled ham...thought-provoking write
Dark Star
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2 posted 2008-10-27 03:11 PM


good stuff....
Janette
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3 posted 2008-10-28 02:14 PM


"Equanimity"

evenness of mind especially under stress ... Great word usage here.

Enjoyed.

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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