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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2008-09-09 04:16 AM

It was so beautiful,
That deck of cards that came crashing down.
No longer am I allowed your warmth,
Your scent; laying next to me as we sleep,
Or the reassurance that you'll always be there.

This divorce is more pain than torture itself.
Screaming doesn't give it justice.
I wish that I never woke up from my sleep.
Only if dreams weren't more painful,
than being awake.

I love you.

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Might not be my most creative of works. But y'all get the idea...

Nice to be back everyone! Good to have inspiration to start writing again!

... Heh.

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2008-09-09 08:38 AM

Wow, this is such a deep poem. It's very well written and packs a lot into few words.

Hope everything goes well. Sounds like a painful time.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-09-09 05:06 PM

Like it...sometimes we are dealt pain by our own making and sometimes it just comes on its own...James

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2008-09-09 05:17 PM

Divorce never happens to two people that love each other. Find some one that will love you as much as you love them. Don't waste your love on someone that will not recognize it. It took me 3 times. I was finaly sucessful. you can too. Poetry is a great way to release fealings. NICE.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2008-09-10 05:59 AM

Thanks guys. I've been posting here for... wow... 7 years now. Haven't posted in a long time.

Thanks for your support. Just started writing again. Be in touch!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2008-09-10 07:11 AM

I'm glad to see you writing again Android! You've captured a lot of depth and raw emotion in this piece. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2008-10-28 12:05 PM

Glad to see you posting again as well! Though this one hurts. It goes straight to my heart

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2008-10-28 09:27 AM

I honestly believe that loving someone that does not or doesn't anymore return that love is the second most painful thing we can endure (death of a loved one being the first). I know it has brought me to my knees. And I am just starting to stand on my own again...

we do stand again and so shall you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2008-10-28 01:51 PM

Android 17 - things will get better, time will do it. Wish you well...

BC

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