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Open Poetry #43

a poem i wrote

Brad_88
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since 2008-10-27

Posts 4

0 posted 2008-10-27 03:32 AM

you fall into the deep end when does it ever end
im just trying to understand the way that i am did you ever
look at what i really am take a picture of my thoughts falling away
like sand dissappearing with the brush of a hand

here comes your hand wiping away what we had leave me scattered in
this messed up pile of denile made me realise what what i could not be

you took it back from me the feeling that made me so happy just to be
in this messed up misery and i could sit remmbering how it used to be
but that would be a lie that everyone could so blatantley see why
would i want to be back in something that has made me feel like ive died

all i have are these eyes but they see to deep to deep inside holding on tight
to this misreable lie lie these eyes see to to deep inside its the day when
you question evey step youve taken was it always so forsaken feel like im dammed
every time i look im aching do you see the way im shaking i know
you dont know what youve taken

here comes your hand wiping away what we had leave me scattered in
this messed up pile of denile made me realise what what i could not be

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2008-10-27 08:30 AM

Welcome

enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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