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Open Poetry #43

Atonement

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2008-10-26 04:00 PM

He walks alone
on paths unknown
beneath a silent moon,
From lake remote
a single note,
comes call of distant loon,
A second's pause,
as in him gnaws
thoughts of long ago,
Moving on,
past thoughts now gone
in balm of night's bestow.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-10-26 05:02 PM

ah...

so it isn't just ME today.

I've always thought that you write beautifully, Tim, but it's especially moving when our moods match.

(Let's blame it on the moon, yes?)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-10-26 05:04 PM

Lovely poem, Tim. Fits my mood too.
Ida

tsu
Junior Member

since 2008-10-20

Posts 29
u.k.

3 posted 2008-10-27 04:19 AM

such a lovely write..short but so haunting.

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