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All Shall Pass |
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Dreamflight Junior Member
since 2008-10-22
Posts 15USA |
ashes, with the snow fall so lightly forming graves of white and grey stars shattering silver glass reflects only for a falling second, broken hearts burning flower petals flutter the only color in a world of black and white torn paper, carried away by iron-heartless winds their words never spoken waves crashing on black sand a pearl on the shore now here, now gone a breath of vanilla caught by time only an unmade memory a drop of blood on red velvet was it really ever there fingers of ice clutching a last breath breather, unremembered earth back to earth our bodies the only touch we ever leave forever on the world |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your deep thought and powerfil imagery. Excellent write. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Welcome to PiP, interesting write...well crafted with interesting imagery |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"a breath of vanilla caught by time only an unmade memory" You paint interesting mental pictures in this piece. Enjoyed! And welcome to Passions Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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