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Dreamflight
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since 2008-10-22
Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-10-26 09:56 AM



ashes, with the snow
fall so lightly
forming graves of white and grey

stars shattering
silver glass reflects
only for a falling second, broken hearts

burning flower petals flutter
the only color
in a world of black and white

torn paper, carried away
by iron-heartless winds
their words never spoken

waves crashing on black sand
a pearl on the shore
now here, now gone

a breath of vanilla
caught by time
only an unmade memory

a drop of blood
on red velvet
was it really ever there

fingers of ice
clutching a last breath
breather, unremembered

earth back to earth
our bodies the only touch
we ever leave forever on the world

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-10-26 01:28 PM


Love your deep thought and powerfil imagery.
Excellent write.
                           Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-26 08:50 PM


Welcome to PiP, interesting write...well crafted with interesting imagery
Janette
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Chicagoland for now
3 posted 2008-10-27 11:17 AM


"a breath of vanilla
caught by time
only an unmade memory"

You paint interesting mental pictures in this piece.

Enjoyed!

And welcome to Passions

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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