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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wind whispers, can you hear them now hear them if you can, calmness claims speaking when no one listens names without words, words without names wind whispers, noises without sound hear them if you can, quietness quips moving souls without their knowing holding hearts within their grips wind whispers, singing o'er the breeze hear them if you can, serenity says see them bristling through the trees watching reasons without ways wind whispers...no need for hearing wind whispers...just right for needing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You describe the night outside with perfect clarity. Thank you for the inspiration. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Perfectly lovely discription of the wind, Steaven. Ida |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
nice Lovie |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"speaking when no one listens ..." "moving souls without their knowing ..." "watching reasons without ways ..." This read is an intriguing blast of air. Enjoyed the breeze. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, poetess. I can hear the winds whispering from your  to the s of your readers!  Love & Whispering Winds, Linda  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - nice write about wind whispers... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Wind is one of natures essentials, lovely when it whispers but I hate it when it's blowing a gale. Enjoyed the write Steaven. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, just happy to provide inspiration...appreciate the generous remarks Ida, just to be close to your description would be good...thank you Dark Star, thank you kindly Janette, clever comments...glad you liked it...thank you yann, appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Linda, I know this is probably insecurity on my part, but I feel I need to convey that I am a guy...but just glad that you liked it Bill, I appreciate your comments Lindsay, couldn't agree with you more...thank you for commenting |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This read was as nice as the soft ocean breeze I enjoy most of the year. Nice whispers. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Artic, always appreciate it when you stop by...thank you Mark, I can remember when I lived close to the ocean...nice when you can...thanks for reading and commenting |
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