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Open Poetry #43

Our love is like an Ocean

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2008-10-27 03:18 PM

our love is like an ocean
moving smoothly
throughout the sunny day

The cool sensation of water
tingles in between
my skin

until a storm comes
disturbing the waters
and destroying the love we have

Starr

Newpoet
Member

since 2008-05-16

Posts 72

1 posted 2008-10-27 04:01 PM

I liked this poem's imagery and meaning.

Hopefully, the waters will calm again!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2008-10-27 11:50 PM

there is always a calm after the storm

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2008-10-30 03:22 PM

"until a storm comes"

storms always pass
but the ocean... the ocean is forever

nicely done

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