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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exhale The last leaves of columbine quiver reluctantly Blown colors fall from moonlit trees, now blue As November makes entrance on sullen lip Relinquishing order to chaos Apprehensive of the cold Sad skies, drip tears of fond adieu Succumbing in the wind For just this moment Just now Turning within a circle larger Alone, sapling to spear Dug into the earth, endure to endear Then vault me forward On wings of Gratitude~ Copyright Kkh 10/26/08 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The last leaves of columbine quiver reluctantly Blown colors fall from moonlit trees, now blue As November makes entrance on sullen lip Relinquishing order to chaos.........." You have a way with words, in seasons, and from heart! Lovely dear TD!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
nice |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"endure to endear" love this phrase, but I never cease to be amazed at your word choices |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
your words are so eloquent that your poem creates a perfect painting in my mind. i love this.. "..as november makes entrance on sullen lip.." |
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