Open Poetry #43 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
copper metal morning without many smiles the fog is only our saliva sliding past the leather of my mindless mind faster forward then when you were behind and I see your eyes on the dawnset like the breast mountains on an eastern with that easy to climb recognition but there are memories too, like footprints perhaps the highway is the only unconditional that I never have to RSVP to with more than another handfull of throttle and the moments of hesitation before heaven I am sure of your curves, how they turn me way beyond the on switch and past dangerous but they change so often in the mornings from where they were mentioned in evening before we made our sin place shiverings _______________ daark..(kinda owgish) |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I enjoyed your early morning reflections in this one. By the way, I just had to ask - driving and, listening to OWG on Sirius channel 28? [your reference to --->(..(kinda owgish)] From the play list I think the best of the lot is "Won't Get Fooled Again - The Who." Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
i just love your highly charged observations on driving in this! "i am sure of your curves,how they turn me way beyond the on switch and past dangerous but they change so often in the mornings from where they were mentioned in evening" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you don't even know how much I miss the fog...can't wait to get back to it! An early morning ride up the coast would be heaven |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed! ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"sin place shiverings"...interesting phrase...also exceptional imagery all throughout |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I am sure of your curves, how they turn me way beyond the on switch and past dangerous but they change so often in the mornings from where they were mentioned in evening hmmm.... yes Mr Daark.. you could be onto something here! enjoyed this... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you guys bless me...thanks to each of you for your touch...this little harley ride is one of my favorite routes..guess it shows |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I smiled as I read this. I saw you. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah reading this again Mr Daark.. smiled my day... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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