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night walk |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
softly walking on a sunset beach sand sprinkling grains like a salted shaker warm sun setting, curtains drawing closed haze-moon glowing like a beach ball thrown hand follows hand in soft embrace whispers grow silent with the coming night the gait of steps slows to let snails pass by and the sun disappears o'er horizon's line the moonbeams dance with the glee of a child and stars begin their glistened glow arranging sprinkles 'cross the darkening sky simple waves lap the shore and wet their feet her hair blows in a gentle breeze with highlights of night-beams splintering he smiles and thinks, then thinks and smiles she turns her head to face the light and down the beach you hear someone say, "let's walk tonight in nature's way" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow!! Beautiful write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like a lovely place to be. Ida |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"sand sprinkling grains like a salted shaker ... haze-moon glowing like a beach ball thrown ... the gait of steps slows to let snails pass by ... the moonbeams dance with the glee of a child ..." So many fanciful lines you have served in this one. You made me use a spoon, cause I did not wish to miss a drop! But most of all thanks for writing this line, it truly did make this reader smile ... just terrific! "he smiles and thinks, then thinks and smiles" Excellent write! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you kindly for your kind words Ida, it is a lovely place--I've been there...thanks for reading and commenting Janette, you are way too kind in your comments (but I can be vain enough to gladly accept your high praise) seriously, thank you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
softly walking on a sunset beach sand sprinkling grains like a salted shaker warm sun setting, curtains drawing closed haze-moon glowing like a beach ball thrown......" ~Beautiful Imagery~ -- I absolutely enjoyed reading this write!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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