Open Poetry #43 |
Spider |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Inspired by Huan Yi's post, thank you sir. Spider (Acrostic) Twitching, expectations maw, humbly clutching silken thread, enticing, mother natures law, faultless spinner of the dead, lost in games, you play so well, you lie in wait, for what? pray tell. OLIAS. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, OLIAS. Spiders give me the creepy crawlies! You certainly gave me a goosebumple or two with your vividly descriptive acrostic! ~ and t h e f l y doesn't have a chance! "Twitching, expectations maw, humbly clutching silken thread, enticing, mother natures law, faultless spinner of the dead, lost in games, you play so well, you lie in wait, for what? pray tell." Eeeks! and Egads! ~ yer good! Well done! EA |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks for your kind words Earth Angel Regards Olias. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I find spiders facinating and this poem is not bad either. Ida |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thanks Marchmadness for your kind words Regards OLIAS |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Spiders certainly aren't my best thing in life but I can handle reading a good poem! Well done! Helen |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Bravo! Me likey. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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