Open Poetry #43 |
My Special Plant. |
Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
When my plant grew fast, I was excited. When I smoked from it, I was delighted. When an ash fell into my couch, The house ignited. When the flames roared in the sky, The town united. Delighted. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
OK, I'll bite, Was the town delighted that your house burnt down, or because you had a lot of plants that when burning, make people happy? Be mellow, Man, And go get something to munch on. |
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tabme Junior Member
since 2008-10-03
Posts 37Mississippi |
XD great. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... I've been reading your stuff and I find your use of couplets both interesting and effective. The implications of what ain't said is intriguing as well. Enjoyed. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Newpoet, I get it. They enjoyed the fumes from the house. These plants were grow indoors, right. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
had to smile, but still not sure if I'm supposed to |
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