Open Poetry #43 |
Time To Start Anew |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Time To Start Anew Such a talented guy Use your creativity Turn your life around You have the ability You must remember To yourself be true I know you can do it As I believe in you With continued hope No matter the climb Know it can be done One step at a time Endless possibilities Are waiting for you Rid those old habits Time to start anew Hope ©2008 |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A wonderful poem of care and encouragement here Hope, to who ever this is sent to, that person would be more motivated to try harder and do better. Loved it. Rick |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear HopeS, This poem has good end rhymes, and a lovely picture. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is beautiful and wise too, dear Hope! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
I loved this poem. Optimism at its best! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - it's truly amazing what can happened when one finally decides to start anew. Good write... BC |
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tabme Junior Member
since 2008-10-03
Posts 37Mississippi |
inspiring. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great advice...beautiful picture...well-written verse...exceptional |
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