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Newpoet
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2008-10-22 11:58 AM

Thy traveler steps abroad,
He feels distrust flowing,
People pass by thy Invisible man.
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tabme
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since 2008-10-03
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Mississippi
1 posted 2008-10-22 07:48 PM

invokes three distinct images. nice.  
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-10-22 10:38 PM

Well done.
I perceived standing on a New York street in 1930... a new citizen, a clean slate, absolutely cool write.
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