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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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White Hollow your poetry echoes through my head like a heat storm with no rain thundering at the edge to breathe in stirring air from touchless kisses electricity licks the top of my neck ache is upon the winded whispers causing shivers to invade my skin I fly from this ground flat footed arms open and raised in wanting and this embrace meets no comfort white empty from a hungry hollow "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
inspired by /pip/Forum106/HTML/001848.html thank you c |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You make my heart soar like a hawk.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! Both of you made my skin tingle this morning!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You two could inspire a rock! ((^*)) Both poems were absolutely moving and beautifully done. However, having felt the ache within, I shall spend the day remembering I suppose. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I fly from this ground flat footed arms open and raised in wanting" I am rooted to the spot such beauty in both poems such emotion thank you both |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
ache is upon the winded whispers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ How poignant is that!!!! The emotions you convey are so very sensitive and delicate. You are inspired beautifully, Helen~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a delicious dance!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Helen, I will surely miss your poems maybe you could send me some when I get the address where i will be in jail love you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - You don't write just because, you write words from the heart. Your writings are touching... BC |
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