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Open Poetry #43

simple sign

norunnin
Member

since 2008-10-16

Posts 71

0 posted 2008-10-16 12:46 PM

There is a simple sign
only evident to the blind
i am here to drop the dime
on my mind

and now i choose to see
what on earth is happening to me
so stop all around
and smile when you learn that
we are buried in the ground

its time to see the wisdom
of the frown
an ode to the last living
in the town

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-10-17 03:32 PM

Yo Norunnin,

I think if you read some of the poems posted here, and commented on them, you might learn something.

I do like your "drop the dime" phrase, I don't hear that as often as I'd like.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (10-17-2008 10:41 PM).]

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