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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 running down the hot sidewalk 2 coins jingling in his pocket anticipation of orange soda his own bottle, just for him shaved head reflects the sun shoes slapping, coins jingling anticipating |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo TinaTrivett, Yes, that's the way it is. This is a well captured street moment. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
You captured a moment here....Really enjoyable.... yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So real , Tina, I feel as though I am watching this scene. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, you nailed this one, Tina. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very nice word moment here Tina I felt it and heard the jingle |
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