Open Poetry #43 |
goldenrod |
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
october noon and all is well the poplar turns the whippoorwill the pansies rest their pretty heads among the scattered flower beds sumac berries staining clothes silken petals on the rose goldenrod lets down her hair autumn hanging in the air |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Tina, this is delicious, I would so much like to see automn in America... have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful as always, Tina. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Tina that is one cute poem with great rhyming, loved it. Lindsay |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tina~ Your thoughts are so original ... so unique ... so totally lovely~ Gosh .. how much I adore this ..~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the way this just tumbles off the lips...exquisite in word and in essence...specially delectable (someone already used 'delicious' |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tina, I am saving this one - it's wonderful. xoxoxox A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very lovely, indeed! Love, Margherita |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Lovely write Tina! ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A thoroughly enjoyable Autumn fling read! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Tina this is so perfect! |
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