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When I was muse
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When I was muse |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Once in time the sky could hold us cradled in its zone of freestyle blues at waters edge we'd gather deep in its feathered pond 2 hands held in silhouette edged in filagree greys along the cobblestone groove was before the iron pressed you flatfaced un lines of grimace worn on white collar worlds of industrial mood was once in time you called me Priscilla and cherished me your confidant and primetime muse. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-11-2008 08:35 AM).] |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
"Once in time the sky could hold us" I shall have a dream of this tonight. Great imagery. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetInkyLady~ I don't think that anything I could say would do justice to the absolute beauty of this writing~ (and yet ...  )I need read no further to find the perfect piece for the day~ There is such beauty in this~ I am holding it all in continued review of your thoughts~ 'Once in time the sky could hold us cradled in its zone of freestyle blues at waters edge we'd gather deep in its feathered pond 2 hands held in silhouette edged in filagree grey along the cobblestone grooves before the heavy handed pressed your face flat in lines of grimace worn on the white collar worlds of indusrial mood was once in time you called me Priscilla and cherished me as confidant and primetime muse.' ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - yes indeed, you do write well... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
exquisite imagery...lovely write |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ms Inky.. I love this ! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is totally awesome, dear Michele! One that I will read more than once for the emotions it conveys. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You paint to the page, as morning paints to the sky. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
This is an excellent write!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sadly beautiful, it brings tears to my eyes. - Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Once in time the sky could hold us cradled in its zone of freestyle blues......" Very Poetic of You! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely write, Michele. Ida |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you all kindly for reading me |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
I love the part about freestyle blues. beautifully abstract and attractive to my ears. |
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