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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-10-12 11:21 AM



Shared the laughter

And some tears

Chasing after

Inspite of fears


So very close

Yet far away

Needing most

For you to stay


Learning trust

Just enough

Giving us

Chance for love


Winds altered suddenly

The troubled skies

Watched you leave

Tears to cry

This heart to bleed

Taken love so suddenly...
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-12 03:23 PM


What you had will not change, but I know it is a meager consolation.

Your heart speaks poignant words.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-10-12 03:32 PM


Inspired-8 - reading between the words tells of your pain, wishing you well...

BC

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