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Lost In You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LOST IN YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I remember the night when we once met, eyes stared at each and became entwined, closer you were, enticing, knowing you more, as we danced together in rhythmic rhyme. Music sang inside and flowed head to toe, two hearts beat as one at a faster pace, lips then touched softly, gently at first, and I felt them quiver in moments of grace. A bouquet of red wine matched lips of rose, candlelight shadows beckoned, as they would do, eyes softly innocent yet with a woman’s forte, that night left once ago, but I’m still lost in you… ~~~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lovely Bill, to have the thoughts and the memories still is a great thing, enjoyed the read my friend, be well. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bill... this wonderfully romantic! I loved the read... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love never forgotten , so beautiful and touching Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lost in you glad i found you here again  welcome back |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I just would say like Roniece : just wonderfully romantic. yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When you can write like this of a memory then that was truly a very special event, dear Bill. Softly romantic, beautifully rendered. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rick - thoughts and memories is a great thing to have, they will never leave. Thanks for stopping by... Roniece Dawson-Bruce - love to write about romance, glad you enjoyed this one... HopeS - thanks for the kind reply... inkedgoddess - glad to be back, thanks for finding me once again... 2islander2 - thank you for coming by for a read... vandana - thank you, I appreciate your reply... Margherita - Memories never seem to leave, thank you for the reply... BC |
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