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Bruised (Inside and Out)
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Bruised (Inside and Out) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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It's Sunday you'll be at church I wonder if God knows how you touched me inside and out I wonder if you know how it broke me to let you go pretending I was doing the right thing for you knowing the truth was you were through "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a hard pill to swallow indeed can we trick our own minds/hearts sometimes... eloquent as usual you are |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nothing mellifluous in this, just the sore pain. He may pose the same questions and come to the same conclusions, who knows! Powerfully expressed, dear Susan! Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - I'm sure HE will know how you were touched, wishing you well... BC |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ ' wonder if you know how it broke me to let you go pretending I was doing the right thing for you' Oh my ... you've written the pain of many of us~ Heartbreaking truths often surface in the aftermath~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Susan, I knew before this opened that I would hurt for you - and I do. Beautiful writing and oh so sad. I am still trying to remember the title. Alison |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all.. sometimes they don't know. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Susan~ Your heart is gorgeous even when it's bleeding pure emotion. So sadly~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i'm sorry baby girl |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Susan. A long time ago I believed, like most of the world still believes, that "relationships" are discrete things that have a beginning and an end and that they follow each other in serial order, like one after another after ... But now I believe that relationships are friendships or they are nothing. Others pass in and out of our lives and more than half the time we will never know why, or never even get a chance to say goodbye. I wonder about the ones that went away or died, all for no apparent reason, and all the while there are new ones clamoring to get in. May you have all the love that you deserve. Dreaming weird dreams, Jaime |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh sweet lady... this felt unfinished...like your heart broke before you could finish. it leaves a spastic ache in me... ((((((((((you)))))))))))) (the huggie thing smiles, and I ain't smiling) love you *fk* |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sad, painful gem of a write...lots of emotion so well expressed |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 I know this ache...God knows and will heal your bruises The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
An emotional read that touched me. I wish you well. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes things happen so quickly you are left confused... and that wasn't the ending. Thank you all for the love, support and responses. Just another chapter I suppose. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the next chapter in your life's book be filled with all the love and tenderness that you deserve. I really felt this one. Sending a warm, compassionate hug your way, Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is such a sad post Susan and I really feel for you my dear. I hope the sun soon shines again for you. all the best for the future, love to you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Marge!~ After math is never the fun part~ It's like going through withdrawal~ Not having what was so close to you and what your use to anymore... sad write Susan! Huggies!ARCTIC WIND |
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